“Negocios,”
the last story in Drown by Junot Diaz,
gives us a new perspective on a character that has been influential in stories
throughout the book. This last story gives us Yunior’s view of Ramon, who he
had previously always referred to as Papi, looking back from a much later time
in his life. Yunior considers his father’s past and finds details of about his
time in America that show him as a very different man than the glimpses we had
seen in other stories. In the first story, “Ysrael,” Papi is idealized by
Yunior and Rafa as they have few memories of him and expect that he still loves
them and will return for them. This view is also evident in “Aguantando” when
we see the different versions of his return that Yunior and Rafa imagine. In
“Fiesta, 1980” we get a different view when we see Papi cheating on his wife
and see the tension in the household after they are reunited. This is a very
different picture of Papi, who Yunior is afraid of and who is an authoritarian
figure in the family.
“Negocios” describes
a very different version of Papi than either of these two earlier images,
though it still incorporates elements of both narratives. “Negocios” shows much
more of an understanding of Papi himself than any of the earlier stories as it
is focused directly on him as the main character and takes a more direct look
at the time he was away from the rest of the family. In this narrative, we see
Papi making bad decisions and there is an element of criticism in the way
Yunior, who we find out is the narrator, depicts some of these scenes. However,
there are also elements of idealism as Papi is depicted to be on an almost
heroic journey.
Yunior’s
depiction of Papi in this story gives us a new perspective on Papi that helps
us understand him better than in any of the previous stories. But at the same
time, it shows us another version of Yunior. Through Yunior’s depictions of
Papi from the various stages of his life we can see his own development and
understanding of the situation. In previous stories, we see him as a kid, not
fully understanding the situation but with a profound trust in Papi and the
fact that he will return. Then we see the utter disappointment and betrayal
that Yunior feels when Papi doesn’t live up to his expectations in America.
Finally, in this story, we can see that Yunior has matured enough to take a
step back from both of these highly emotional views and take a fairer view of
Papi. While he can’t get rid of all his criticism of some of Papi’s actions or
all his idealization of others, he does begin to understand Papi in a new way
that is much more balanced than any of his earlier views.
I really liked the sentence where you mentioned that we can see his development and understanding of the situation throughout the various stages of his life, because I think we also saw his father through Yunior's eyes. Putting Negocios at the end changes what we think of him compared to the very first couple of stories which was a short story collection ending that definitely made me think.
ReplyDeleteI agree that this new view of Papi we got definitely complicated our views of him. I actually thought that the story sympathized with Papi a little too much, because even after all this time I think Yunior still idealizes his father more than he deserves. To a certain extent he's still a little boy imagining his father "claiming" him on his return to the Dominican Republic. Good post!
ReplyDeleteI didn't really think about the fact that Negocios still shows elements of Papi from earlier stories- I was just taking everything as new facts, a new side of Papi that we haven't seen. However, now that you mention the idealistic and critical views that we get of Papi from Yunior in past stories, I definitely recognize elements of those in Negocios: Papi is in America, striving for the stereotypical, idealistic American dream, but also making some bad choices and mistakes by, among other things, neglecting his family.
ReplyDeleteI hadn't really seen "Negocios" as revealing Yunior's acceptance as Papi. I had simply read it as a delve into Papi's story and character, one who has been the center of much of the short story collection. I hadn't thought that by Yunior being able to be so factual and not tie emotions into his descriptions, but simply narrate, that he's been able to contend with and accept his feelings towards Papi.
ReplyDeleteNegocios was actually my favorite story in Drown for a lot of the stuff you talk about here: showing another side of Papi. I think Diaz does a really good job of making us feel bad for Papi in the beginning while he's out chasing the American dream, despite us knowing previously that Papi is pretty awful. I also like how this story closes out the collection and makes it seem like Yunior has come to terms with Papi and how he treated his family.
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